Walt:Follow an inquiry process and present out inquiry learning about the Special Olympics using MS movie maker. Before making this movie, I looked over the feedback I received last term for my movie about china. Some of the things I took into consideration and tried to improve on when making this movie where use lots of excitement in my vocie and make it flow more. Something interesting I have learnt about the Special Olympics during this inquiry is that the Special Olympics are held every 4 years. A challenge I found in this inquiry was timeing every thing so we dident need to do the parts again. I overcame this challenge by getting organised.
10 comments:
HI DAN,
I REALLY LIKE THE WAY YUO USED CREATIVE IDEAS OF WHERE TO STAND AND YOU HAD HUMOR A TTHE STRAT.
NEXT TIME YOU COULD TRY TO BE IN NOT SO NOISY PLACES(INTERVEIWING ZEPPELIN)
-IMO
hi danial
I really like the way you have added lots of imformation.
next time you could try fimling in a quiter place.
HI DAN,
I REALLY LIKED THE WAY YOU WERE FUNNY AT THE START AND THE FACTS WERE CLEAR AND TRUE. YOU ALSO HAD PICTURES WITH WORDS THAT MATCHED THE TOPIC.
NEXT TIME MAYBE YOU COULD TRY AND MAKE SURE YOU ARE NOT IN A WINDY OR LOUD PLACE.
-MADI
HI DAN,
I REallY LIKE THE WAY THAT YOU HAVE PRESENTED YOUR INFORMATION CLEARLY AND HOW YOU HAVE PRESENTED IT IN MANY CREATIVE WAYS. NEXT TIME THEN MAYBE YOU COULD BE DOING IT IN A QUIETER PLACE BUT OVERALL I THINK THAT IT IS FANTASTIC!!!
-HOLLY
I likes the way you had clear voices at the start. good use of humour and remember to wait 3 secondes before you end a clip. Good use of voices and wonderful facts. keep the camera still. when interviewing zepp, find a quiet place so you can hear what you are talking about.
Hi Dan,
I Love your movie because it contains a-lot of info about the special olympics and its logo and heaps more!
The only thing that i could tell you to improve on is the wind which you cant really control but to solve that problem by moving to a shelterd place and also to move to a quiet place with Zepp
But i like your movie!
hi Dan i really like it how you sent your info across next time you could use a louder voice and go to a quieter place.
Hi Dan
Your movie had lots of info and you were specking loud and clear.
Hold camera still, speck louder, tell Zeppelin to speck louder.
-Lara
HI DAN,
IN YOUR MOVIE I LIKED THE WAY YOU USED CLEAR VOICES SO YOU CAN UNDERSTAND EVERY WORD YOU SAY.
NEXT TIME YOU MAKE A MOVIE YOU COULD FILM IN A QUIETER ENVIROMENT AND KEEP THE CAMERA STILL
OVERALL YOUR MOVIE WAS REALLY GOOD
-MoNiKa-
HI DAN,
YOUR MOVIE WAS REALLY GOOD YOU GOT THE MESSAGE OUT YOU WERE ALSO REALLY CREATIVE.
NEXT TIME YOU COULD TRY AND KEEP THE CAMERA STILL AND GO TO A LESS WINDY PLACE BECAUSE YOU COULDN'T HEAR SOME OF IT.
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